Talk:CODAM model: Through attention to consciousness

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    LMW review comments:

    The article is, in my opinion, improved by the most recent additions and changes. I have made a number of small corrections of typos etc. In the version currently online the references do not appear except for the first one, although when one edits them they do appear. Something is wrong but I don't know what. I have also made a couple of reviewer comments in boldface in the text that need to be addressed. Although I still think the article is too long and perhaps emphasizes explaining consciousness too much, at least this material is less prominent and is more integrated with the main material on CODAM. In sum, if the remaining problems are fixed I would be willing to accept the article.

    What remaining problems?

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